Death relived the race, flying
first to tragedy, next to context.
Imagine a patch, a circle with people
and flowers. Death did something good—
offered help, gave gentle assignments.
But Nature answered with violence quickly.
You wouldn’t believe the block.
So that’s the easy-reading version. A blackout poem is where you take an article (newspaper, magazine, etc.) and black out all the words except the ones you want to keep. The spacing of the words is part of the challenge. Below is a version that more closely mimics the spacing in the article this poem came from. It gets messy to read because WordPress doesn’t allow very good control of spacing (in the context of poetry).
first to tragedy
a patch a circle with
death did something
you wouldn’t believe
2 thoughts on “Day 14 #NPM15 – Loss (blackout poem)”
You created a vivid image in this poem. But that is one of your skills! Thanks
Thanks for the kind words!