Death relived the race, flying
first to tragedy, next to context.
Imagine a patch, a circle with people
and flowers. Death did something good—
offered help, gave gentle assignments.
But Nature answered with violence quickly.
You wouldn’t believe the block.
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So that’s the easy-reading version. A blackout poem is where you take an article (newspaper, magazine, etc.) and black out all the words except the ones you want to keep. The spacing of the words is part of the challenge. Below is a version that more closely mimics the spacing in the article this poem came from. It gets messy to read because WordPress doesn’t allow very good control of spacing (in the context of poetry).
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death
relived
the race
flying
first to tragedy
next
to
context.
imagine
a patch a circle with
people
and
flowers.
death did something
good
offered
help
gave
gentle
assignments.
But
Nature
answered
with
violence
quickly.
you wouldn’t believe
the block.
You created a vivid image in this poem. But that is one of your skills! Thanks
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Thanks for the kind words!
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