Quiet fair night; spun
too long on the Octopus.
Carnie takes a puff.
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Really, really good one! I just love the haiku’s!
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Thanks, Leslie!
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It’s the puff of the cigarette that makes this piece.
Carnival of One
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Thanks. I like that line too. Might have to work on this one some more.
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