Bridge (haiku)

May 15, 2013 / Karin Wiberg

Grown-ups at tables,

dealing diamonds, bidding spades.

Shuffling on the stairs.

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Inspired by the theme at Haiku Heights #247.

10 thoughts on “Bridge (haiku)”

Rallentanda

May 15, 2013 at 6:20 pm

Clever. Love it!

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- Karin Wiberg
  
  May 15, 2013 at 6:46 pm
  
  Thanks! 🙂
  
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menons129

May 16, 2013 at 2:21 am

Great! original idea.

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- Karin Wiberg
  
  May 16, 2013 at 6:51 am
  
  Thanks! Trying to get beyond my initial ideas…
  
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readinpleasure

May 16, 2013 at 5:24 am

Brilliant take, Karin. 🙂

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- Karin Wiberg
  
  May 16, 2013 at 6:50 am
  
  Thank you!!
  
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Mark M. Redfearn

May 16, 2013 at 3:49 pm

What is that mysterious shuffling on the stairs? Children?

Bridge to the Stars

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- Karin Wiberg
  
  May 16, 2013 at 3:54 pm
  
  Exactly! I remember my parents having bridge parties and us four kids spying from the stairs into the living room. 🙂
  
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  - tigerbrite
    
    May 19, 2013 at 11:33 am
    
    So descriptive 🙂
    
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    - Karin Wiberg
      
      May 19, 2013 at 1:53 pm
      
      Thank you!
      
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