I keep my secrets tucked inside
because that’s where I know they’re safe
from prying eyes and wounded pride.
I keep my secrets tucked inside
securely wrapped and tightly tied.
Though sometimes they begin to chafe
I keep my secrets tucked inside
because that’s where I know they’re safe.
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I realize this is not a particularly sophisticated (or even clever) poem, but I’ve never written a triolet before and wanted to give it a shot at the prompting of NaPoWriMo. Our host’s description:
“A triolet is an eight-line poem. All the lines are in iambic tetramenter (for a total of eight syllables per line), and the first, fourth, and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines. This means that the poem begins and ends with the same couplet. Beyond this, there is a tight rhyme scheme (helped along by the repetition of lines) — ABaAabAB.”
Got it??
On top of that, I layered Adele Kenny’s prompt: secrets.
Karin, I think this is beautiful. I do love the triolet form.
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Thanks for the encouraging words, Susan. I am not very experienced with forms. It seems to me certain forms will be more suited to certain topics. Will have to watch for opportunities to try more triolets.They are kind of pretty with all the repetition.
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I like them when I have lines with a certain musicality. Have done about two or three, and they are fun.
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