Tanka (NaPoWriMo Day 11)

the young crabapple

is still two dimensional

cut back the leader

force branches to radiate

swap the obvious for growth


NaPoWriMo‘s prompt today was to write a “tanka,” a traditional Japanese form of poetry. In English, a tanka typically has five lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5-7-7, though this is more a guideline than a requirement due to the differences in English and Japanese units of language. This is the first tanka I’ve written, so I did a little reading online to get a better feel for them. I found this article very helpful in terms of writing one, though I’m not sure I’ve quite captured the form yet.


Here’s the literal crabapple, though of course there’s a figurative one as well.

Looks great from this angle...

Looks great from this angle…

From this angle it's two dimensional!

…but from this angle it’s practically flat!


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