roll in the herb
garden, flipping the earth,
burbling, trilling their joy in good
Today’s prompt was from our host at NaPoWriMo: write a cinquain. This is a form I’ve not tried before. The sequence is five lines of 2/4/6/8/2 syllables, with 1/2/3/4/1 stresses in the respective lines. I guess it can be done completely in iambs, but isn’t required (which is good because I didn’t read that rule until I was done!). I found the cinquain more challenging than it looks.
2 thoughts on “Friday Night Bath (NaPoWriMo Day 5)”
I think you’ve done a great job. I have a lovely image of rolling (happy) chickens (pre-marinaded?).
Hah! Perish the thought!! 🙂