What is more agile
than a waterfall shattered,
deftly rearranged?
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Haiku Heights is hosting The September Heights, a haiku-a-day challenge with a daily word prompt to be used as a theme and/or in the haiku. Today’s prompt is “agile.” Click through to check out more haiku or to add your own.
Karin–love this. Waterfall shattered. Gorgeous.
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Thanks, Susan.
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Love it! “Deftly rearranged” very nice.
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Thank you, Barbara!
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I enjoyed your haiku. I like the last line “deftly rearranged”
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Thank you for the kind words. 🙂
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Lovely. I like the contrast between shattered and deftness.
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Thanks. I appreciate the comment.
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I have absolutely no answer to your stunning question!
An Agile Threesome
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I’m not sure I do either!
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I think the one thing more deft might be the fingers of the one who shreds it in the first place 🙂 like a curious little child who chooses to flick a few drops on his sibling…
Lovely haiku, Karin.
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Hah! I like that.
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I’m liking the Haiku! Very crisp.
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Thanks, Wanda! It has been a lot of fun, and by repetition I am learning more about the form. Good exercise for the month. 🙂
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