brush keys, autumn leaves
start to fall from my fingers.
cool. weather. concert.
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Haiku Heights is hosting The September Heights, a haiku-a-day challenge with a daily word prompt to be used as a theme and/or in the haiku. Today’s word is “autumn.” Click through to check out more haiku or to add your own.
Like the music in this!
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Thanks! At one point the last line was “My first jazz concert.” 🙂
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nice…looooooove jazz 😉
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I love haiku! It’s the only type of poem I’d ever really liked (that is, until you broadened my horizons!) Look forward to seeing what you create this month!
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Thanks, Linda. It has been really fun so far. Make sure to go check out some of the other haiku–fascinating to see how different people respond to the prompt.
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Lovely haiku….I like the cool concert ~
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Thanks, Grace!
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This is nicely done,,I liked it…I mean it gives a picture in the mind..
RS:)
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Thank you for the kind words, Ramesh.
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Love nature’s sound in this one on Autumn. Well done.
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Thank you. Words and music go well together, yes? 🙂
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I could hear the music you were making. Nice metaphor.
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Thanks, Patti. I love jazz…
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A concert in winter.. 🙂 Should dress warmly so I don’t freeze when I get lost in that music.
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Hah! Good point!
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I like the ending especially, and the leaves falling from your fingers.
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Thank you. I was trying for a jazzy feel on the last line. 🙂
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Your autumnal music is heavenly!
My Lady Autumn
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Thank you. Your song was lovely too with all its verses.
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very nice, liking the way you put things today
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Thanks, Bruce!
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